Ignite presentation learner response

 1) Type up your feedback in full including the ratings out of five for each of the categories. 

Research - 3
Music video / magazine concept - 4
Language : terminology and theory - 4
Representations - 3
Audience and industry - 4
Delivery - 4
22/30

Comments:

. Great justification for mainstream nature of song with 1.5Billion streams
. Really clear presentation , good timing - spot on for the 15 second auto - advance
. Great name for your artist
. Music magazine needs to be original but using XXL as inspiration in terms of design can work
. Magazine content plan is good those articles should work well
. Camerawork and editing are solid - will need specific examples for your statement of intent 
. Mise-en-scene a real strength - lots of slides used for this
. Representation addressed through stereotypes - good points but no media theory. You'll need this for the statement of intent next draft
. Audience points are fair - need to make sure it fits the brief
. Industry strong - love the fan engagement slide and limits to digital convergence / record company 

Q+A

. First Q on narrative + performance - good question and answer suggests a need to build this into plan
. Second question on progression is excellent - really useful feedback in terms of structure
. Answer on audience psycho-graphics is strong and some really good responses to ideas and feedback

2) Use this feedback, comments from peers and your own reflection on your presentation to self-assess and write your own detailed WWW and EBI for your coursework concept and presentation as a whole.

WWW: 
. Good artist names - Good assurance of the artist
. CLAMPS are used well in all aspects including high level uses of make-up and setting 
. Detailed explanations
. Camerawork and editing was explained well
. Good idea on magazine


EBI:
. Psychographic audience isn't confirmed
. Potentially more locations to create feelings
. All props used should be mentioned

3) Write a paragraph discussing how your presentation will lead into your actual coursework production. Do you need to update your statement of intent? Does your concept offer enough clarity? Is it appropriate for the audience specified in the brief? Is it achievable to film with the resources you have available? Can you add media terminology or theory to your statement of intent now you have reflected on your presentation and seen others? 

In terms of statement of intent I need to make a full write up of it as I haven't because of me not having a full understanding of if i'm going to continue with the idea or not. It is likely that I will follow through with this idea however I will be thinking of the best possible ideas to ensure my music video eventually meets  with my full potential. The filming ideas I have would be possible with the resources that I have. I need to expand upon media theorists and theories in order to guarantee I have correct media understandings that will force me to have a music video of a higher standard.

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